{"id":469,"date":"2008-09-29T18:06:44","date_gmt":"2008-09-29T22:06:44","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/?p=469"},"modified":"2008-09-29T18:06:44","modified_gmt":"2008-09-29T22:06:44","slug":"response-to-afternoon-a-story","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/2008\/09\/29\/response-to-afternoon-a-story\/","title":{"rendered":"Response to afternoon, a story"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I can\u00a0relate to some of the frustrations about <em>afternoon, a story<\/em>\u00a0not having a clear story line.\u00a0 Some pages of the so-called &#8220;story&#8221; don&#8217;t always relate to subsequent pages,\u00a0and this caused me to feel a little bit stumped while I was reading.\u00a0 I\u00a0would say that <em>afternoon <\/em>doesn&#8217;t fufill our need or desire for closure,\u00a0but I\u00a0do think that\u00a0this was Michael Joyce&#8217;s intention.\u00a0\u00a0The work raises a lot of questions for the reader &#8211; something I think all\u00a0enjoyable texts\u00a0do.\u00a0 It&#8217;s ironic, however, that although we desire closure, we\u00a0are also intrigued by ambiguity and uncertainty.\u00a0 As readers, we like to ask questions about the larger meanings behind a work.\u00a0 <em>What\u00a0is the writer doing here?\u00a0 How does he or she do it?<\/em>\u00a0\u00a0 <em>What is the significance of this particular\u00a0character, object or scene?<\/em>\u00a0 <em>How does this apply to the real world?<\/em>\u00a0\u00a0\u00a0There&#8217;s something appealing about a\u00a0text that leaves readers on the\u00a0edges of\u00a0their seats\u00a0and gives them the feeling that they want more.\u00a0 Just as <em>afternoon<\/em> doesn&#8217;t have a clear story line, our lives don&#8217;t follow a\u00a0predetermined path.\u00a0\u00a0Our life experiences are often scattered and disconnected and leave us feeling baffled, like <em>afternoon<\/em> does.\u00a0 This is perhaps why the hypertext appeals to us and why we can identify with Peter&#8217;s character, who doesn&#8217;t seem so stable.<\/p>\n<p>So one thing that intrigued me while I was\u00a0perusing\u00a0<em>afternoon<\/em> was the\u00a0different references to tigers.\u00a0 The character of Nausicaa\u00a0mentions them when she reflects on a businessman she once met in India who &#8220;kept white tigers in a chrome steel cage surrounded by orchids.\u00a0 Afternoons his servants would walk them through the gardens on long leashes.&#8221;\u00a0 Nausicaa\u00a0then recounts her dreams of the &#8220;white tigers in the\u00a0cool garden.\u00a0\u00a0[She] would think of them stretching their flanks, their paws like velvet across the cool stones of the garden paths,\u00a0their tongues slowly lapping the curved surface of the gold radio.&#8221;\u00a0 Another reference to tigers comes when Peter describes the humidity\u00a0&#8211; &#8220;Four full days now it has crouched over us, the humidity like the exhalation of tigers, scratch of tough leather across the piss damp concrete.&#8221;\u00a0 I thought the juxtaposition of hard and soft\u00a0was interesting here.\u00a0 By\u00a0this I mean that when I\u00a0usually think of tigers, I think of them\u00a0as hard, aggressive animals.\u00a0 The mention of the &#8220;chrome steel cage&#8221; also evokes the idea of hardness for me.\u00a0 On the other hand, the\u00a0mentions of &#8220;orchids,&#8221; &#8220;long leashes,&#8221; &#8220;dreams&#8221; and &#8220;velvet&#8221; evoke the idea\u00a0of softness.\u00a0 It&#8217;s an unlikely combination, and I&#8217;m not quite sure what the meaning\u00a0 behind it is.\u00a0 However, I think the releasing of the tigers from the cage and into the garden might be symbolic of Peter&#8217;s unraveling or unpacking of memories that might reveal\u00a0that he did in fact\u00a0witness his son&#8217;s death.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I can\u00a0relate to some of the frustrations about afternoon, a story\u00a0not having a clear story line.\u00a0 Some pages of the so-called &#8220;story&#8221; don&#8217;t always relate to subsequent pages,\u00a0and this caused me to feel a little bit stumped while I was reading.\u00a0 I\u00a0would say that afternoon doesn&#8217;t fufill our need or desire for closure,\u00a0but I\u00a0do think &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/2008\/09\/29\/response-to-afternoon-a-story\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading <span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Response to afternoon, a story<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":5,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[14],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-469","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-reflections"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/469","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/5"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=469"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/469\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":478,"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/469\/revisions\/478"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=469"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=469"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/www.samplereality.com\/gmu\/fall2008\/343\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=469"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}