For this assignment i first read Ann Luu’s story. I would first like to say that the suspense that was present in this story was very strong, she kept the reader very in the dark until the end of the story. As far as the choices for links went they were fairly simple and strait forward. I dont think they added to the story, but they didnt really take away from it either. I suppose that she could have linked the words as they were expressed in the story to more relative links. For example she could have linked "tickets" to a link about boat tickets, since that is the kind of ticket in the story. The second story I read was by Bryan Pierson. This story was also very enjoyable to read, and its cut off point left the reader unsatisified with not really knowing what happened, or if he really did it. The links that are present within Bryan’s text are not really relative to the story at all, but this does not necessarily take away from the story, it actually lightens it up a bit and contrasts what you might expect. For example when i clicked the word sliced within his text i was expecting to see some bloody body, intead i saw a cartoon image of sliced bread, it was a interesting surprise.